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jreamwriter
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United States, Georgia, Atlanta

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Please Help Me Understand

Someone please help me understand
the deceitful laws of this land;
why black men and women are truly deviating from God's original plan;
why many are deceived to believe they can't
when they really can.

Please help me understand
how after 400 years of slavery
and all we've endured century after century;
black people can't seem to achieve the greatest victory;
unity in our own community.

Please help me understand
the blood and the crip ordeal;
why, just because you wear red or blue,
you're labeled as food;
targeted to be killed;
Like the days of cowboys killing outlaws
up in the countryside hills;
just for thrills;
leaving the government more room
to pass new laws and crazy ass bills;
Not realizing they're keeping
cemeteries and prison systems filled.

Please help me understand
why we have less blacks in schools
and more leaving incarceration;
or existing from behind prison walls
or awaiting re-incarceration
living impoverished;
inevitably committing the same criminal activity
that led them to parole,
or either probation;
not on the front line of the civil rights war;
fighting for the recreation of this nation;
So that we can
truly rebuild a stronger foundation;
and eliminate the situation
of murderous gang organizations,
which have been poisoning the minds
of our next generation.

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kasar Comment by: kasar - 2007-12-14 13:03
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Loved it.(period)
bronzen Comment by: bronzen - 2007-08-13 18:55
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this is truly an heartfelt and thought-provoking write.......well stated.......you really penned what was needed to be said and the questions that are asked constantly.........beyond excellent write
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-04-12 12:14
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Thanks for the read.You touch on a real issue facing many today. There are worlds within worlds many people dont understand or no about until someone speaks up.Great write, Sasha
lornawelsh Comment by: lornawelsh - 2007-02-14 04:24
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This is an awsome poem, feels like it should be carved in stone, epic stregnth of voice, this should perhaps be a new constitution?

Thank you lorna x
MMutami Comment by: MMutami - 2007-01-13 06:39
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The choice of words is execellent. I was really touched by the subject you are dealing with. I wish those fake statesmen who daily do anything at whatever cost to reign the world, would just read the poem and provide us with an answer.There too much segregation, illegal bombing and hanging of people, all blessed by these fake leaders who on television clips and on front pages of newspapers tirelessly preach about 'democracy, rule of law and this other misterious talk about war against terror'. Who is causing more terror ? "Please Help me understand?" This is a good poem. It touches on what I experience every day. Thanks sister.
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