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Samuel West
United States, Florida, Orlando

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A True Farther

At times I do not understand why you don't support me in terms of what I do. Whether it's
supporting me financially or just admiring what I do best. Instead you simply keep doing what ever you have to do and ignore my life.

Sometimes I ask myself why you even made a way for me to become a human being if you didn't have a plan to take care of me.

You have neglected me all together. A good father should be constantly checking up on their children. A good father brings food to the table without any problems.

A good father knows how to love his own children. You have proved yourself the
total opposite of what a good father should be.

I just wish that the coffee you drink
each and everyday would wake you up enough so that you would both understand and comprehend what a true loving father really is.


©2006 Samuel West

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tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-01-15 17:24
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heartfelt, honest, and open--makes me think of journal entries--always refreshing to see someone willing to express their hurt and disappointment. thanks for the read
annmarie Comment by: annmarie - 2007-01-15 15:20
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i really like the last line. effective imagery.
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