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| i have one suggestion for this amazing poem, will instead of can? Thanks for all of your poems, I enjoy every one. |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-08 13:51
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| This poem can be used to interpret so many situations on a personal level, political level, etc. It is simple yet powerful. |
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| wow.. I am amazed at this one. like vanity hides in a crytal palace |
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| So short yet so powerfully-written and deep. Wonderful. |
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Comment by: - 2007-03-30 14:17
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| i think this is great stuff, too. however, as much as i like shorter poetry, i think youve got a good idea here and you can run with it a bit further - i think you should extend it a bit, drawing out the message in the last line, rather than leaving it as it is. showing not telling, as it were |
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