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Elinki
Chris McGuffin
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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Speculatively Raped

An eye for an eye;
I want to see the whole world go blind.

A tooth for a tooth;
I want to feel the world bloodied & bruised.

You don't know me
and so you fear me

and you speculate,
so you hate

Unaware of my taint
permeating body & mind;
distorting your every vibration,
retorting all causation's for your hate of me
right into your etheric being
causing gradual bane,
slowly rotting you from corona to core;
corroding away your self-worth.
Leaving you broken and abused
by the hate you hate for me.

You never sought to understand.
You just stooped in reprimand,
fabricating pretenses;
validating your hate.

I'll hate you, if you hate me;
making me a double edged blade in your brain.

An eye for an eye;
I want to see you blind and hyperventilate
in restraint

A tooth for a tooth;
I want to feel you claw at my feet,
unaware that it's me-
lavished in amusement
from your own self-defeat
(wondering which part of you I shall eat).

You lost me in speculatory rape,
so you hate

and so I oscillate your hate,
leaving you in a derogatory fate
to reiterate your past mistakes,

losing your spiritual prowess
(leaving it for me to consume)
all due to your failure to communicate.

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jaimedunkle23 Comment by: jaimedunkle23 - 2007-02-13 11:48
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Yes! Even the fucking score!
maggie m Comment by: maggie m - 2007-01-16 23:32
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Wow!Ouch!
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