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Cyan
Cyan Brown
South Africa, Kwa-Zulu Natal, Durban

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Punk Princess

Declare the world unfit to live in
and the people all money driven
paint your nails red and black
with eyes that look like your on crack
chain yourself to rebellious tokens
and wear only shirts with vulgar slogans
Express your hate for lifes society
and all it's restrictions and hypocricy
Your a Punk Princess with an attitude
no friends, but followers in multitude
A spirit too free to restrain by
decency
and a lonliness to acute to show complacency

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ncrca22 Comment by: ncrca22 - 2007-10-25 07:05
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This was a great little number. Definitely a girl we would all like to be friends with. And I agree the last two lines are fairly close to perfect.
anastar Comment by: anastar - 2007-05-11 17:43
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Cool funky poem filled with honesty...loved it...

A tiny suggestion:

A spirit too free to restrain by
decency
and a lonliness "to"(too) acute to show complacency

this is my favourite passage!
Dunny Comment by: Dunny - 2007-02-05 07:46
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Ha. Awesome.

Sounds like my kind of girl. Where can I find one?
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