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Cyan
Cyan Brown
South Africa, Kwa-Zulu Natal, Durban

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Envy

Curling smoke on a
cigarette butt
dangling from the mouth
of the girl I hate.

Ruby lips pursed in
a fake sexy pout
huge pocelain eyes
boobs pressed out.

She has nothing, only
everything I envy
She is who I want to emulate
but can never endeavor to replicate

and I despise her for it.

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anastar Comment by: anastar - 2007-05-11 17:36
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I can relate to this poem...i think everyone has felt that about someone, something or someplace...and odds are that woman probably envies you ;)
lyrically yours Comment by: lyrically yours - 2007-01-24 11:14
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Wow, very descriptive, well-done.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-01-17 10:55
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LOL...second stanza made me laugh out loud.

I do not think there is one women on this earth that has not envied another.

Enjoyed.**
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