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simowierdo
Jeannie Zheng
United States, NH, nashua

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Road to my dream

Sitting here on a cloudless day.
With all the people I love and hate.
Miracles happen, I can change my fate.
Don't bother me now, I might be late.

With all my fantasies, my goals, my dreams.
Of course nothing, is as easy as it seems.
If I try my best, but I don't succeed.
I will be back, just you wait and see.

I constantly hear, people laughing at me.
Saying it's impossible, for me to have my scene.
But I block them out, don't care what they think.
I'll just show them, I'll do my thing.

I believe I have, whatever it takes.
Full of confidence, imagine what I can make.
Lots of hard work will pay off in the end.
But if it does not, I will always try again.

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simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2007-01-19 16:31
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thank you! thank you very much * bow * i'm so relieved to hear you guys liked it 'cause i thought people would think it's cheesy...and to sabihah: i know, i usually don't write too much sad poems but i haven't been so upbeat over the past few days...i'm much better now!
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2007-01-19 10:00
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This was the most wonderful (Fucking Wonderful, I Say, I Say), upbeat, kick ass poem I have read today. This is something for the rainy days. I can't say what was the best - loved it all. You have just made my day !!
sabihah Comment by: sabihah - 2007-01-19 04:07
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awe finally a happy poem :), really good write I especially like the optimistic message it portrays and the ryming lines gives it a great flow.
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