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teejay
Tweaky Jane
United States

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Gods and Devils

Water crushes
Flowing over
Bringing me down.
Under the current is were
I stand...
Under this current; I drown.

My mind is a magic that
Can part the seas...
It longs for your company.
Talk with me.

Talk of...
Constellations and death and victory and emptiness and love.
Lost.
You know the meaning.

Talk of...
Fear and hate and bitterness and sweet and courage and love.
Lost.
You know. Look further!

Life is gods and devils and
We never know which will appear.
The best we can do is live; follow our souls.
It's okay to feel.

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teejay Comment by: teejay - 2007-01-20 10:53
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Je t'adore! Mine too. :)
Dunny Comment by: Dunny - 2007-01-19 22:09
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I don't know. Shouldn't it be 'where'? Or am I reading it improperly?

A wonderful piece, as we have come to expect ;)

Most delicious part:
"Talk of...
Constellations and death and victory and emptiness and love.
Lost.
You know the meaning."

These are a few of my favorite things!
teejay Comment by: teejay - 2007-01-19 09:41
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Oh, did I used the wrong were? sometimes I confuse them...
Floating Comment by: Floating - 2007-01-19 09:30
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will you consider 'were' used in 'Under the current is were'?

I like the theme.
teejay Comment by: teejay - 2007-01-19 08:28
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Thank you all, you are too kind.
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