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kyrasdaddy
Robert Cano
United States, TX, San Antonio

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Getting Nowhere Fast

Without you I am nothing, a nobody
A mere breath in an eternity of life'¦
I will soon wither as my body slowly dies,
Breath will become shallowed
And soon this shell will become entombed

Every step I've taken in life,
Has seemed to have been away from You
Yet in every step I've taken,
You've been there just the same, loving me,
Walking beside me and holding me in times of need

Your presence I cannot escape, though tried I have
And every time You push, so do I,
Yet I push against, and I fail You'¦
I can't breathe, I can't see, yet in the hope You give,
I am eternally Yours and forever spoken for

In my life, I've gotten nowhere fast
Quickly destroying my life, repeating past failures
And every tear I now shed, I shed for You'¦
For I am undeserving, yet You chose me
Even when I spat upon your face

What love is this? That You should care enough
To lay down your life for me? I'm nothing,
You are everything'¦what was, what is, and what will be,
I beat you, flogged you, and drove the nails'¦
Who am I? A mere murderer, undeserving of love

But You are my Father, the one who holds me up
Whenever I fall. He who holds the stars in place,
He who scarred himself for me'¦
I am Yours now, I devote myself to you
For as You gave all for me, so I give my all to You




This is the first poem posted of the new year...yeah, it's sad, but hey, I've been busy. I hope you all like it. God bless you.

Robert

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rachelle11 Comment by: rachelle11 - 2007-09-01 12:37
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stunning! thank you for sharing your faith w/ such abandon:)
sharmaine Comment by: sharmaine - 2007-02-18 17:11
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I love love love love love love love this!!!!!! Thank you so much for writing this and I absolutely love your dedication to Christ. I'm actually trying to get myself back in a closer relationship with Him again. And it's so funny that I've read this now because one of today's preaching was about desperation for Christ and being free from your struggles and things that keep you from Him. This went right along with it. God bless you!!! *Muah*
Robin Marie Comment by: Robin Marie - 2007-02-15 18:14
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This poem is amazing. I think it's easy when talking to Christ to not face what we're really dealing with, or to make it simple, but you make it powerful and meaningful.
lornawelsh Comment by: lornawelsh - 2007-02-14 04:39
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This is an important peice, it is easy to digress in to the fanatical or cosy when dealing with spiritual poetry, but you have managed to keep this sincere and edgy, the emotions are authentic and the use of graphic details realy bring the theme into focus. Lornax
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2007-01-29 19:19
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I absolutely love this piece. It is a reflection of someone who knows where they stand in their beliefs and isn't afraid to express it. Beautiful, Robert.
*Bookshelved*
Yvy
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