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Dan Sheridan
United Kingdom, Surrey, Guildford

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Number One Son

I'm ready now to reveal my pain
The day, dad died
No one, nor I
Will ever feel the same

You would have been so proud,
So many friends, family lining the streets,
The policemen bowed

I miss you dad
Can you hear these words?
I'm talking out loud
It seems unreal to others, to me absurd

I have one wish, that will never come true,
So I go to my dreamland instead
Where I'll always find you.

And even though we lost the battle to the cancer.
I'm proud I had the chance to be your number one son.

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wolfgrl1423 Comment by: wolfgrl1423 - 2007-02-13 19:43
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This is a nice tribute from a loving son to his father. Very loving.
angelbytheocean Comment by: angelbytheocean - 2007-02-13 10:54
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This piece was beautiful and so heartfelt...I felt the emotions and the pain with the loss of a dad to cancer. "So I go to my dreamland instead" in dreams we will find the loved ones we seek that have passed on.
Always,
Robbie
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"Love Life, Lust Life"

by Dan Sheridan



Love Life, Lust Life
Romantic Poetry
ISBN: 1413748554

Inspiration for the book came in many forms, starting out with the trials and tribulations of young adulthood to those of love and romance.

Love Life, Lust Life

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