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Lance W Toohey
Lance Toohey
Australia, Queensland, Cairns

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COLOUR ME BLUE (Sonnet)

Beautiful lady you colour me blue
Adrift 'pon a sea of tears do I call,
Send me thy promise, for I must pursue
This quest I'll not falter, nor shall I fall.
Beautiful lady you colour me blue
Allow thine eyes to but enter my soul,
Seek forth the beauty you know to be true
Feel naught but passion, thine heart be my goal.
Beautiful lady you colour me blue
Succumb I pleed to the fires within,
Ne'er will my lips speak, the sound of adieu
For within thine arms, would my life begin.
Beautiful lady you colour me blue
Come seek forth a rainbow, colours for two

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NicFran Comment by: NicFran - 2007-02-05 21:51
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They say true love is but a faded past time feelingā?¦but yet..you breathe life into LOVE with your charismatic words.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-01-28 18:15
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I cannot find a piece of yours I don't like.

This was beautiful...there is nothing else to add.
AnSmash Comment by: AnSmash - 2007-01-25 11:19
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beautifully written! A step away from the normal sappy love poems. Great job! :)
antonanon Comment by: antonanon - 2007-01-22 10:28
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beautiful ye olde romantic! delightful, where's the mandolin?
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