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thecandystore
Christina Jamie Peroca
United States, New Hampshire, -

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Hotel

What lies beyond,
the white wooden door,
Its metallic knob,
the provocative blue sign
secrecy, forbidden doors
to lust, lies, deceit
twist the knob
of fate and see
Newlyweds on a romantic honeymoon...
A workaholic aiming for the deadline...
The boss, fooling around with his latest secretary...
I hold the keys
and I was there with them
Making a toast to marriage...
Typing up that dreaded report...
Getting a raise in one night's work...
Therefore - I need not be disturbed

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twoshea Comment by: twoshea - 2007-07-05 00:59
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Very good subject and I never thought of this before. I wanted it to be longer and I wanted you to play more with the idea that you held all the keys, watching and knowing.
nealmcdonald Comment by: nealmcdonald - 2007-05-20 11:57
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ahh ha ha... sexy and devious. What a great write
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-05-07 04:13
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oh very nice. i like this one.
Freddy6 Comment by: Freddy6 - 2007-05-03 15:43
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This is very trutful, I suppose. It is a well written piece.
uglihed Comment by: uglihed - 2007-04-28 14:26
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Kind of lusty. Kind of pop-ish. interesting.
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