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inviscera
Stevie Gray
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

Words: 150
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Comments: 18

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At The End Of The World

It was almost midnight
when the first snow whispered down
and over the next few hours
transformed the world
into something closer to how we wanted it.
At 2 am,
we stepped outside,
saw gardens and streets
- all known, familiar -
but in a different light,
hushed and alien
under a soft white inch
that creaked under boots,
before everyone else
could tread it to sludge
and muddied greyness.

Remembering another night,
- warmer,
elsewhere -
but much the same:
the tide gone out
leaving sand unspoiled,
unbroken by the footprints
of people who were not us,
moonscaped by moonlight,
perfect and ours.

We could have been the sole survivors of some strange and silent apocalypse.

The next day,
everything changed back again,
the street, the beach...
we couldn't keep it for ourselves forever.
But I remember those two nights:
snow and sand,
and no one else
but us.

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Daniel Car Crash Comment by: Daniel Car Crash - 2007-02-07 12:11
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hmm, nice work. i liked: '
before everyone else
could tread it to sludge
and muddied greyness.'
the best
SkarredPoet Comment by: SkarredPoet - 2007-02-06 16:48
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I want to live in a place that has snow and a beach...I like this a lot.
Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-02-03 16:20
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What can I say, Inviscera. Your work never fails to move me. Brilliantly tactile, damn near palpable, visualizations here. Been there and makes me want to revisit.
brandoncintron Comment by: brandoncintron - 2007-02-01 19:43
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The imagery here is excellent...you take the reader to where you were. Your words seemed to flow like my own memory and thought, and so I connected with this poem. Thank you for sharing!
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-01-31 14:05
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....I thoroughly enjoyed this one. You are not only playful with your poetry, you actually weave them into something deeper, intense with an aftertase of gentleness.
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