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Comment by: - 2007-10-13 13:30
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| This piece is heart-wrenching, and I love it. The physical shape of the poem (which has, of course already been mentioned) is a brilliant style choice. |
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| nice. short but full meaning to the point. it's awesome, i wish i knew how to write like this |
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Comment by: mitra - 2007-06-24 04:28
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| Nice to read something very creative like this. The visual representation, the brave admission to having to "need" somebody else when all the time thinking you were the "savior". This could work is a variety of situations. Great job. |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-05 15:30
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| Well done Brandon. Brief can be good. thanks for a good read. |
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Comment by: GreenIce Online- 2007-05-24 20:30
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| wow...In the end...I needed You...thats so sad... written well...but so sad.... |
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