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And They Call It Coffee Love
Eyes brim from the rim,
Mocha dances on her lips
as she watches his waltzes -
tray in hand amongst the tables.
A curt, but polite, nod
for the gentlemen
who regard his turns with disdain.
A sneer as each cup is placed
in front of them, handle
turned just so...
pick up can be
manoeuvred without delay.
They turn quickly from his
pirouettes and sweeping bow,
worrying about his sexuality.
A smile tangos into the froth,
and she laughs at his practised act.
Though his sweet syrup is poured
never endingly into multi-coloured vessels
raised by serviced crowds,
his honey is reserved
for the polka girl -
who he calls 'Coffee Bean Eyes' -
in the corner of the café,
with her cappuccino smile,
and milky latte heart.
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| presume this was Andmymares muse...Not a suave smile, tangoing in the froth...though wont say that what the trick of the eye did to tango... |
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| I enjoyed the story you were able to relate in this - I guess half the fun of sitting in a cafe is 'people-watching'. Love the last two lines especially. |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2007-02-04 17:48
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| You painted a wonderful picture. I could see her sitting in the corner watching the whole show. How proud she seems of him. Seems that they share a great laugh at the end of his shift. |
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Comment by: lezah - 2007-01-29 14:35
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Hello Teri
<hug>
Lovely to read you in my comments box. Hope the coffee hits the spot. had a lovely, frothy cappicino earlier...mmmmm.
H
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Comment by: Teri - 2007-01-29 13:04
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""worrying about his sexuality.""
lol That really made me lol.
Ah, two of my favorite things in life: coffee and dancing. Great references and playing with words/images, Hazel. I was a little confused at first with who was the server, but that's because I haven't had enough coffee yet.
You've made the entire scene so clear, I can picture everything with great clarity. His serving of the snarky snots especially. lol Wonderful poem, Hazel. Thanks so much for sharing. Now, for more coffee.
Teri |
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