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Underestimated
And so I take my leave...
I've built my own hell on Earth.
I can't be killed;
I refuse to suffer.
Pick me up,
Or shoot me down.
I will survive.
Rather with you than without,
Yet I will endure.
I could do right,
But you only see wrong.
I'm stronger than you know,
I know more than you think.
I'm better than
What you give me credit for.
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Comment by: - 2007-01-31 09:01
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| Usually we underestimate ourselves or we let the others do that. It's up to us to change it:) |
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| Very good, tight flow, to the point. Great read and allows the reader to relate quite easily. |
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Comment by: Midden - 2007-01-29 23:40
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| A fine testimony of the human spirit, written in a beautifully concise manner. Magic, well done, man. |
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| very powerful as a one on one situation, as a profile of one's defination of one's self a tad conceited...smile...therefore I take it as a one on one descriptive emotional outburst...nice work...Lance:) |
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