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aikaida
Ai Sohma
United States, Va, Sandston

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Betrayal

Dripping; my soul torn apart at the seems
Shattered; my heart crumples in despair
Shut down; my voice fades into the distance
Locked up; the animal inside wont shut up
Spent out; my time and energy wasted
Unleashed; all my emotions spilled out
Deserted; left behind to fall
Done; will not continue to try anymore

Some best friend you are'¦Kilala-kun!

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morbidprincess Comment by: morbidprincess - 2008-10-07 14:57
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A really good poem.
tragedymuffin Comment by: tragedymuffin - 2008-05-01 20:20
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Thumbs up!
KeikoAlvarez Comment by: KeikoAlvarez - 2008-01-30 16:38
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High school? I am very impressed! Nicely done!
daysleeper Comment by: daysleeper - 2007-05-26 21:11
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very talented!
Rae Comment by: Rae - 2007-04-12 19:47
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ah, I loved this =) you have much talent...and I too like the structure. thank you for posting!
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