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blindgoat
Jordan Uhlig
United States, VT

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Both Guns Drawn

I'm just a hired gun,
Facing the wrath of the gods;
The world has come apart around me.
Splinters of reality cascade by
As I follow the path set down.

I'm a revolutionary,
Traveling down my chosen road,
Ready for whatever comes my way.
Unforeseen circumstances assail me,
Yet I persevere.

The heavens crash before me,
Everything has gone wrong,
But I'm still standing, waiting,
Both guns drawn,
Wearing the grin of a demon.

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Lance W Toohey Comment by: Lance W Toohey - 2007-02-02 00:15
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Ah! this reminds me of the last great act of defiance as the eagle swoops down on the little mouse who's standing there with his middle finger pointed directly at his assaliant..smile...sometimes we just gotta go for it...though sometimes taking another direction ain't that bad either.....good work..Lance:)
Midden Comment by: Midden - 2007-01-31 23:55
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Heh, it brings to mind Gemmel's Jon Shannow, but that's just me ;)

Brilliant work though, man, straight to the point but still with the wonderful flow of your brilliant voice.
starrfly Comment by: starrfly - 2007-01-31 23:13
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Really like it! Unabashed, unapologetic and just right to it. Great one.
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