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blindgoat
Jordan Uhlig
United States, VT

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Of the Worst Kind

I'm a villain of the worst kind,
I pushed all of you away,
You who are closest to me,
You who gave me nothing but love.

I'm the worst kind of monster,
I lashed out at you,
Distrusted you, attacked you,
When you did nothing to earn it.

I don't deserve anything now,
I've been such a demon.
Why do you even care about me
With all the evil I've done?

I'm a murderer,
No, worse,
I'm a traitor
To those who love me most.

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Lance W Toohey Comment by: Lance W Toohey - 2007-02-03 21:12
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fairly potent here my friend, this reader feels a lot of pain within this write....top emotional read...Lance:)
polo Comment by: polo - 2007-02-03 00:14
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wow i know how u feel
Comment by: - 2007-02-02 22:54
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So much pain and bitterness? No need my friend. We all deserve a lot of love and care, no matter what we've done. Humans are humans and sins and mistakes are our luggage to this life.
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