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Iniquity
Aubrey Asylum
United States, Indiana, Portage

Words: 100
Access: Public
Comments: 11

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"You are Mine"

Chapter One



She struggled before falling completely under his spell.

' Do you want this?' He whispered dangerously to her, lightly caressing her neck with his lips.

' Yes.'

He nodded, inhaling her scent. ' It is decided then.'

He lifted her wrist. ' Will you have any regrets?'

She shook her head, pressing herself to him.

' No.'

Her wrist was lifted to his lips. ' Then, I shall mark you.'

He bit into her, listening to her arousing gasp and moans.

' The mark will show the world,' he dropped her wrist, claiming her lips with his, and watching her shocked eyes.

' You are mine.'

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L Johnson Comment by: L Johnson - 2008-05-22 12:25
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Wow I want more! I like how you catch the reader right away
metalhead Comment by: metalhead - 2008-04-20 15:16
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very well written... i like :D
Vision79 Comment by: Vision79 - 2008-03-25 20:33
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Is this flash fiction or will there be more? You have talent
Ephemeral Comment by: Ephemeral - 2008-03-01 03:10
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Very nice start. Short but sweet in a sense. I've always been in a 'love/hate' relationship with vampires and night creatures, so the fact that I actually like this short piece was surprising. I'll be looking at your other work as well. Keep it up.
lgolson Comment by: lgolson - 2007-12-17 12:11
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I loved this, the passion you create within a few sentences makes me want so much more!
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