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Sankylady20
Sarah Hopkins
United States

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You are...

Impossible things are not so impossible
if you say they're not,
because you can accomplish anything,
you are strong,you are real.

Permanent things are not so permanent,
if you dont believe they are ,
because I know you can change anything,
you are smart, you are imaginative.

Ugly things are, Not ugly at all,
if you dont see them that way,
because you can make anything beautiful,
you are pure, you are grace.

Today's end has not yet arrived,
because you haven't yet sung,
You are yesterday, you are tomorrow .

A broken heart isn't so broken,
if you mend it's shatter.
beause you can fix anything ,
you are compassion, you are love.

You are heart, you are soul,
you are the start,
you are the finish,
the begining , and the end.

But what you arent ,
the one thing you are not,
is mine.

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carriedale Comment by: carriedale Online- 2007-06-14 14:16
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good job, I was hooked on the sugary lovie dovie stuff, then, bam! I like the rhythm and style.
Comment by: - 2007-02-07 10:02
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ooh, i like this! this has a great progression to the ending, and it's extremely well thought out. great write!
SnagglePuss3749 Comment by: SnagglePuss3749 - 2007-02-06 16:41
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This poem was awesome! I loved the "you are ___ you are ___" at the end of each stanza, and the way you brought it home in the last two. Wonderfully done!
BrindleyHD Comment by: BrindleyHD - 2007-02-06 10:46
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I like the development of this piece, you open it out step by step, and then shut it back down with a snap in the last stanza. Good stuff!
Fouchega Comment by: Fouchega - 2007-02-06 10:06
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Very beautifully written! I love that twist in the last stanza. Very nice work - Gavin.
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