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Armani Jeans and Nike shoes
Backwards caps and ink tattoos
Secret hand shakes snap, crack and pot
Calvin Klein boxers and a billabong top
Label me and stick me in a box
Trying to be different, Manson Rocks!
Lead me around on a collar and leash
To be original is to be just out of reach.
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I think it's really good with sounds, and length. The ending is a little obvious-- could you put it another way? You obviously have a lot of talent! Brava!
