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| But you left out one, the pill for when you are happy. Wait they give you pills and ads to make sure you always know there has to be something wrong with ya. I really enjoyed the flow and meaning behind your words. So many wanting a quick fix and not waiting to take respondability, have someone else fix it for you (referring in this piece the dr) Brava |
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Comment by: Stefan - 2007-07-24 07:25
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| It's like when little kids believe a thermometer will cure their ailments because they associate it with having a fever. |
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Comment by: anastar - 2007-05-11 17:30
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| That was such a true poem...very realistic and accurate....and so well said... |
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Comment by: Valerie - 2007-04-04 17:25
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Very nicely written. You did a great job with the alliteration, and the flow was liquid. I like this.
One small typo - 1st line "your" should be "you're" or "you are"
Cheers! |
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| really they know manything except themselves and death. |
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