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blindgoat
Jordan Uhlig
United States, VT

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Inside Your Thoughts

How do you do the things you do?
If you loved me
How can you justify this?
If you have feelings for me still
What are you doing?
I'm lost and confused
Yet you don't seem to care.
I'd give anything for you
To only talk to me again.
If you don't care anymore
Then why do you avoid me?
If you do care,
Then why haven't you come to me?
I want to understand you,
To know what is in your head,
What you are thinking,
If you miss me,
Or ever had second thoughts.
What is motivating you?
This is the worst path to follow
Yet it is the one you chose.
Why must everything remind me of you?
Painful memories,
But I still hold on.
I'm not sure why,
I can't explain it to myself
But something tells me
You and I, we arn't through.
I wish I would just stop
Misleading myself.
Would you ever help me?

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Comment by: - 2007-02-10 00:48
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"But I still hold on.
I'm not sure why,
I can't explain it to myself"
I know that feeling Jordan. I'm holding on for so long and you know why? Because I'm sure that if we insist on what we want, we finally get it!! So hold on my friend and keep writing to ease your pain.
DeepWaters Comment by: DeepWaters - 2007-02-09 21:07
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OMG this is exactly how i feel right now you captured the emotion perfectly great job.
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