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Pandoras Heart
You are She
Who predestined to be
An open heart beauty
sent to befriend many
mending their broken hearts
You are She
Whom loves lost but not
yet a casualty of wars faught
tortured by enemies, for what,?
ever holding fast for others
You are She
Whos not yet been exalted
often, though it hurts to say, assaulted
yet to be humbly wanted
held high in the regard of another
You are She
The dream of restored Love
A Grace sent to yet move
and mend even this broken winged dove
and I speak of you Sheri
You are She
who has bled and will yet bleed
a precious gift that the world needs
sent to the hungry to feed
Knowing you have plenty
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| A very powerful poem, beautiful and it all seems to flow together, despite the lack of direct rhyme (at least, that's how I read it). You certainly have talent for romantic poetry, and I don't just throw that around (I'm not much of a romantic when it comes to rhyming). |
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| Some of the rhyme is a little off, but I can look past that for emotion and sensitivity...nice write man |
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Comment by: abnich - 2007-02-19 08:01
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I don't think this really had anything to do with Pandora. Though it is sweet.
It would have been cool to mention in the poem that the name "Pandora" means allgiving or "all-gifted". |
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Comment by: - 2007-02-17 18:46
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Quite a touching poem, Kent. I think you clearly captured Sheri's essence and obviously struck a chord with her.
Well done, all around!
Michael |
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I have read all you have posted and I am yet to be, but hopefully not disappointed. Words are your gift such as mine, and I support you all the way. Publish a book! I can say that I would buy! You are a romantic, and I strive for that so much, because most men today are not.
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Poetically Always Ashley |
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