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blindgoat
Jordan Uhlig
United States, VT

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Indecisive

You cannot do this,
You can't care
Yet still do the things you do.
You can't be concerned
If this is how you treat me.
All the time I gave you,
When I make a mistake
It's over, just like that.
You hurt me,
You can't still care
And do the things you have done.
You lack even
The most basic of human compassion.
For someone who cares,
You sure don't show it.
Stop pretending to care if you don't,
But act like you care if you do.
This dance has gone on long enough.
Be more decisive,
Either care or don't,
But don't say one thing
And act the other.

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rachelle11 Comment by: rachelle11 - 2007-08-27 16:04
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uncanny... i have experienced this exact annoying problem of late. i overanalyze and overanalyze and just wish he would have the balls to tell me one way or the other... thanks~ glad i'm not alone;)
neverdreamedb4 Comment by: neverdreamedb4 - 2007-05-31 12:44
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I've been there before. Very nice.
starrfly Comment by: starrfly - 2007-03-12 15:50
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Stop peeking into my head!1 Defintely can relate to the feeling! you summed up this state of mentality perfectly.
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-02-19 10:12
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I feel this poem, been in this state. I think this is a personal piece that you wrote from the heart. I admire that in you, raw emotions. That makes good poetry.
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