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AJSmith
Adam Smith
United Kingdom, Stourport

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Downloadable Ex

Cryptic codes of exploratory interstices
of The Great Spider's Web
pixellate on the screen, jump synapses;
the mouse wriggles, but is caught,
entangled by leads and boredom,
the Spider gobbles the disabled mouse.

Enabled, tails of cursors stalk pages
of planetary gobbledegook;
electric junk-food, battery-powered boobs,
news and thongs, sport and games,
a luminescence too bright and
electric letters of invitation.

A past girl poses a hello,
her words, unwavering lines
like the vocals of her box.
But 'Come' and trace my face
across the subatomic stratus
of the wondrous LCD, says she.

My space, her space, her life,
her face suddenly remembered
as a new hologrammatic screen
invents itself, imitating memories;
realisation sparking that that face
is the same, that girl is the same.

Debased in space as attainable
particles, senses of magic moods me
numb; she's downloadable.
It's everyone's space; such a reactive
rape of treasured rememberings
violates my virulent program.

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leslie joseph Comment by: leslie joseph - 2007-07-03 10:22
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Ah! I really like this poem. You have quite a way with words. You were able to say something mundane in such an artful and effective manner.
heidrunknikander Comment by: heidrunknikander - 2007-05-02 23:58
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Very interesting.
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