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Idainne
Garry Alan Nixon
United Kingdom, Manchester

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There It Goes

There it goes again
Wave it out the door
Insanity is messing your head again

Wasting your days, the music plays its way
Sending and bending its messed up rules to your head

You say you'd rather play dead than be force fed their lies and screwed up alibis when insanity is messing your head again.

Tick tock, look there it goes again, knock knock, wave it out the door
Insanity is twisting your head again

The time it starts to fly
Where to? You wonder why?

Then when perhaps, your mind it just, snaps
You will just realise
You cannot lick up all their lies
Your mind just suddenly cries out for some music just when

Tick tock, there it goes again, knock knock, wave it out the door
Insanity has fucked your head again.

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Comment by: - 2006-01-27 02:04
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i loved this peice. It kind of reminded me of a rap like when it says 'tick tock.. there is goes again... knock knock..wave it out the door' and such. Anyways, again i loved it.
Idainne Comment by: Idainne - 2005-12-18 06:18
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My thought for this piece was for it to be a monologue or soliloque within a script or such.

It always surprises me that what you tend to think are your weakest pieces, people tend to like etc.

Thanks for the crit people.

Grr xXx
Scarlet Shimmer Comment by: Scarlet Shimmer - 2005-12-15 12:58
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This is my favourite piece from everyting i have read here so far, I love the last line.
roni23 Comment by: roni23 - 2005-12-13 03:09
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i really enjoyed reading this i loved the repeated use of the line 'Tick tockâ?¦there it goes againâ?¦knock knockâ?¦wave it out the door'
it really drws you in
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