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nlinde
Nick Linde
United States, Nebraska, Lincoln

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Patrick Bateman

Three tables down you are patient, striking,
deadly. Your combed back hair,
confident as you drink your poison.

Mergers, Acquisitions. A convincing life,
the new sheets, stained, covered in cran-apple;
Your attempt at a reason: the carelessness
of a snack. The brooding reality of a body,
lodged somewhere between hardwood and heaven.

Next Thursday you have a meeting. Prepare,
put on your best suit, your best smile,
tell yourself you have control of this.
Pretend those victims were problems, inferior,
worthless. You did the rest of the city a favor
they rewarded you by looking the other way.

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Comment by: - 2007-02-22 16:19
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love the description. definitely not what i where i thought this was going. nicely done.
elizajebetty Comment by: elizajebetty - 2007-02-22 14:42
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'lodged somewhere between hardwood and heaven'
Liking this line...it's one that has a particular ring to it.
:D
tiger Comment by: tiger - 2007-02-21 07:16
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wicked, I liked it.
Comment by: - 2007-02-17 11:55
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"You did the rest of the city a favor
they rewarded you by looking the other way."

or did you do them a favor?
Travisty Comment by: Travisty - 2007-02-14 16:54
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"Three tables down you are patient, striking,
deadly. Your combed back hair,
confident as you drink your poison."
I love it.
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