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Fruitcake
Tanja Durrant
United Kingdom, London

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My Putrid Valentine

You are the psoriasis of my skin,
a multiplicity of memory
growing faster than my life.
I can't help but scratch until I'm
red raw and oozing
with the thought of
you.
Sunshine brings a temporary relief
from the itching and a sweet
forgetfulness.
But in the depths of dismal
February, midway, when
hearts and flowers abound,
the interminable
grating
of remembrance holds you
near,
shedding fragments of us on the
bedroom floor.
Sheets are dishevelled from
solitary tossing and failed turning
of a new leaf.
Oh my darling, putrid valentine.
Be gone.

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Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-10-22 18:17
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A dark valentine indeed. It's in my ballpark.
Lance W Toohey Comment by: Lance W Toohey - 2007-02-21 14:21
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now this is a different slant to Valentine's Day....smile...not the type of words usually associated with this day, but we all have differing memories..I do hope that soon I'll be reading of a more "sweet" Valentine message fron you Tanja....good descriptive wordage used here to convey your message....Luv Lance.
Comment by: - 2007-02-14 09:57
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It sounds like you enjoy Valentine's Day as much as I do! lol. Nice write!
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