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Daquiridame
Michelle dos Santos
South Africa, Johannesburg

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Enigma

Nudity of the soul
allows the mind
to be clothed with
jewels of wisdom
and garments of grace.
Only to be undressed
by the fingertips
of our memory.

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TonyfromBenoni Comment by: TonyfromBenoni - 2007-02-15 07:44
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This is a truly inspiring and thought provoking piece. Your imagery is strong and poignant - "jewels of wisdom", "garments of grace","fingertips of our memory". A very wise and beautiful poem.
Ethgar Comment by: Ethgar - 2007-02-15 07:35
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I love your choice of words especially:
"fingertips
of our memory"
It's a beautiful piece.
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