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AndyMel
Andy Melhuish
United Kingdom, 123 Fake Street

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Park

I am innocence,
of daylight, a child sliding
into my own smile.

I am graffiti,
of darkness, a child drinking
cider on a bench.

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Comment by: - 2006-10-02 00:27
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I really enjoyed these. they really struck the imagination spot and really let it flow.
AJSmith Comment by: AJSmith - 2006-07-11 03:19
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Gives the illusion of simplicity but says so much more.
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-03-16 09:22
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I hope that isn't my secong grader. Nice work
And Stuff Comment by: And Stuff - 2006-03-10 23:42
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Interesting. It shows two sides of childhood. Which having worked with several it's very true that there are. Very interesting. Cool.
psgri2003 Comment by: psgri2003 - 2006-03-09 17:27
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you could do a whole series of these -- haiku doubles as polar opposites; social commentary in 17 syllables, cool.
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