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suleem
Suzanne Montpetit
Canada, British Columbia, Nanaimo

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Just Because

Five fingers make a hand
five toes form a foot,
one head drives an engine
forward.

Two eyes stare into yonder
where dreams grow wild and free.
A mouth forms words spoken
moving lips to express.

Limbs grow into arms and legs
in the center a heart beats.
a sound so sweet, a tempo.
the melody cannot be traced.

Unborn a baby rocks
unseen a child watches
an adult becomes.

Just because.

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AwesmeChic Comment by: AwesmeChic - 2007-04-10 00:07
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Wow, I don't usually read a lot of poetry but that was pretty good.
Comment by: - 2007-02-23 20:54
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The miracle of life, encapsulated.

Thanks for your poem.

Michael
angelbytheocean Comment by: angelbytheocean - 2007-02-19 11:39
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This was different and I love how the words flowed and came together in the end. Very nice...thanks for sharing your poetic work...
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2007-02-17 11:15
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I like the way approached this theme. It was different, and very gentle in this way.

nice write. thanks for sharing this piece.
MM
starrfly Comment by: starrfly - 2007-02-16 21:50
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Lovely. At first I wasn't sure where you were going, and then it all became clear. A great literary journey.
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