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TonyfromBenoni
Tony Lopes
South Africa, Gauteng, Jhb

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New Text Document

Your pureness awaits
The gentle pitter patter
Of pixeled ink

You breathe deep as my stroking fingers
Inject you
Fill you

And soon you burst with song
Waves break
On your untarnished shore

Subsiding into quiet contentment
You exhale
And are complete

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Daquiridame Comment by: Daquiridame - 2007-02-20 03:21
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I love the imagery, a great piece Tonio ;)
smackalicious Comment by: smackalicious - 2007-02-18 14:37
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Aww, that's sweet. The joys of writing on a fresh piece of paper - even if it is just a new word document. Fantastic. :)
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2007-02-18 05:34
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Nice statement on nothingness awaiting fulfillment.
nealmcdonald Comment by: nealmcdonald - 2007-02-17 23:21
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great play on the visuals
cristinabejar Comment by: cristinabejar - 2007-02-17 11:50
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clap clap clap! I like it! I like the simplicity of it, but more than anything, i like what you are saying about new text documents! hahaha!I could totally relate as i wrote something similar about ink on paper... hehehe. keep it up! - tina
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