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antoNLnius
Twan van Eijk
Netherlands, Limburg, Venlo

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Hope

Hope has gone
Hope has disappeared

I don't want it anymore

Why did i ever want this

I just want to destroy
I just want to hate

But i can't, i'm to nice
But i can't, i'm to sweet

People don't understand this

You have to hurt others to be understood
You have to be a pig to get something

Please take me out of this place, i don't want it anymore.

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kissykissy24 Comment by: kissykissy24 - 2007-02-18 08:38
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like the structure. typo line 1 -disapeerd should be disappeared.typo line 10-understand should be understood.very emotive.
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