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Why do i exist
Why am i here
What is the purpose
Why on this world
I don't belong here
I'm too different
Why did they put me here
Why did they want me
I don't want to be here
What was my choice
Did i have a choice
Just live my life
Just can't get away
I'll always be.................
JUST HERE
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- "excist" = exist
- "to different" = too different
- "I always be" = I'll always be
The feeling of angst drives this poem. These are the sorts of questions many people ask, some on a daily basis (it sounds like the voice of this poem is just such a person). While the message is loud and clear, it isn't necessarily appealing. The beauty of words, the sorrow that can ring in words is somewhat lacking through this straight-forward approach. Though it isn't necessarily for me, I think many people will enjoy this piece and empathize with the poem.
