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Carter Burke
Carter Burke
United States, California

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Adrift

Adrift, ever alone,
I have walked
the path, not least traveled,
but merely least resisted.

Swirling with the wind,
alighting on places
to be called home.
What purpose, my life to live?

In service of Man or God
or those I've loved
or my solitary self,
ever will I know?

Through earned wisdom of age
and penance of youth
only this may I divine:
we travel together to the farther shore.

Together but alone,
On the wind and nudgings of time,
guided by the hand of God,
but adrift in our own minds.

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ellykoggle Comment by: ellykoggle - 2007-04-26 09:56
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This is a beautiful read. Love the easy readable form to it. Just gorgeous usage of words and descriptions. I'm sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing it with us.
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-02-25 17:51
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This was really pretty and somewhat sad.
aelareau Comment by: aelareau - 2007-02-25 10:44
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i can relate to the feeling of questioning purpose here, and pondering as to why we exist... beautifully written, feels like a very unified piece
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2007-02-24 19:32
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First, sorry about your loss, Carter. I really enjoyed this as well. The imagery of the wind is exceptional and I like the opening stanza. Great piece!

Yvylyn
Carter Burke Comment by: Carter Burke - 2007-02-23 09:35
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Thanks, Lenka. The poem has special meaning for me. It was actually written on a whim a few days before my mother passed away unexpectedly.
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