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prudentdream
sonia banda
United States, texas, laredo

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Love is proven

Love is something you cant see, but you can feel it

He is so annoying, he farts and burps and always smokes

But I love him, he plays video games all day long, but I love him,
he is always around and never goes away but i still love him
Love is something you cant see, but everytime im with him i feel it, but everytime people see us, thats when we prove that love is something you can see, its our love..




-----cel and jc forever*******

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Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-10 20:50
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Great. Very amusing and also tells of your love. Love the line ....He is so annoying, he farts and burps and always smokes. So so true. I can relate to this
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