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rrbaerman
Robert Baerman
United States, Washington, Spokane

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Bad News

I dont know what to say
I got this lump in my throat that won't go away
I'm so lost, I can't find relief
I got to free myself from these trappings of grief
You, you extend your hand
Offering hope to the hopeless man
You take my burden but I don't wanna be a burden
Though my feet are heavy and my heart is hurtin'
So I surrender and throw up my hands
I try to fight but I am only one man
And I see the light I know that you can
So for all of that I just want to say
Thank you Jesus be with me I pray.

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rrbaerman Comment by: rrbaerman - 2007-03-02 13:50
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Thank you for the comments and for taking the time to read my work.
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-03-01 18:44
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I really like the flow of this poem, Its short but it gets the point across i liked it alot :) ~ Sarah
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