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Costa Challenge (Pleiade)
butterball
blind to my
bulging belly as I
burrow through drawers of
bulky winter clothes
bypassing the evil
bikini which I thought I
buried out of sight
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Comment by: Juan2 - 2007-02-25 22:41
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I saw this challenge the other day and started on something, but ran out of time to get anything out of it (blasted school!). This is a hard form, but you did well with it. It's a funny little piece, I like it.
Happy Writings. |
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As I told costa, I don't care for Anderson's change to the rules of a Pleiade Poem. This was very well done: humor, followed the rules, fast paced. Great write!
Yvylyn |
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Comment by: costa - 2007-02-19 04:11
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messed up form or not, it works brilliantly. well done.
Best wishes
Costa |
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Comment by: - 2007-02-18 21:07
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This is pretty funny stuff. I've bypassed the whole 'hiding the bikini' predicament by NEVER owning one. Bulky winter clothes are great, even when its 90 degrees outside.
Best Wishes,Jenn |
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Comment by: GrkGrl - 2007-02-18 20:22
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| ugh...i forgot the 6 syllables...oh well...i never did like the name Hortensia anyway...(just kidding, i messed up, i admit it) |
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