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Carter Burke
Carter Burke
United States, California

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Best Days

Forty years and thousands of miles ago,
the man he once was,
poses amidst his brothers.

Faces stretched in laughter,
men improbably young,
facing destiny in the light of day.

Shoulders clasped in strong hands,
with glasses lifted in innocent defiance;
thirsting to drink of life.

The young lions stalked the future,
questing for the next great feast.
Harvesting pleasure from the world
and owing nothing.

Callow and adolescent,
the best and youngest days
vanished with time.
Unwillingly, the memories faded.

But in the hearts
of worn and tattered men
and frozen frames of days gone by,
glory still resides.

The old man smiles
and returns the stolen moment to its place,
within the album that seldom sees the light.

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Comment by: - 2007-03-28 09:18
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I agree Carter, beautiful. Another one tugging on the old heart strings. I like the closing verse, it finishes the piece nicely. If it were mine I might describe the smile in a little more detail. maybe quietly or something similar.
Carter Burke Comment by: Carter Burke - 2007-02-24 07:49
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Thanks Benjamin and Adrienne. The poem means a lot to me. It was about an old photo that I found of my dad in his youth and a side of him that I never knew.
Comment by: - 2007-02-24 07:26
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Beautiful is definitely the word! I love the warm nostalgia in this. It makes me want to ring my dad and uncles for a chat. Lovely.
cosmicgirl Comment by: cosmicgirl - 2007-02-20 10:02
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Beautiful. A rare quiet moment of recollection in the chaos that is this world. I like your "thirsting to drink of life" and "frozen frames of days gone by."
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