Another Costa Challenge (Pleiade-Q)
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Another Costa Challenge (Pleiade-Q)
Query...
quarantine is your only solution,
quit fighting your attraction to
quirky yet charming women, with
questionable morals, who make you
quiver with thoughts of their
quenching your need for adventure
quite thoroughly
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You've mastered this poetry form in this one. Another great contribution to costa's challenge. You've talented and daring (to consider "Q") Good write.
Yvylyn |
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Comment by: costa - 2007-02-19 15:00
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excellent! i love the subject you've chosen, especially like the line "quirky yet charming women, with
questionable morals," there's an impressive rhythm to the whole piece. thanks, GG.
only 23 letters to go... :) |
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| very cool... i havn't read much like this form, thanks... |
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Comment by: ripleym - 2007-02-19 09:02
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| Not sure what the challenge was, but this is brilliantly done. Agree with John about the flow into the next line; works well. |
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Comment by: Kerosene Online- 2007-02-19 08:37
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Great rhythm here, GG. I like how the lines cut off and roll right into the following "q's".
-john |
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