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soulsanction
valerie desilets
United States, Maine, Wells

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Dead Dialogue

I thought I would empty-
these words from my head
Caught up in some library-
but this dialogue is dead.

I only find a vacancy-
in what needs to be said-
maimed again by some memory-
They sleep silently in their beds.

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2007-02-23 20:40
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I understand what you are doing here, but I feel this should be a little bit longer. Complete the thought, the idea, the rhythm. JMO.
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