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Carter Burke
Carter Burke
United States, California

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What Use Mere Words

My life is spent, a poor writer,
nothing of value to my name.
Misused by the imperfect world,
downtrodden, threadbare, worn and cold.
Insufficient for life or love.
Impossible for me to change
the man I truly have become.

By the grace that God has shown me,
I employ my pen to paper.
Crafting lines like works of art.
On display, but hidden within
cellars of anonymity.
Never to know the hands of one
who treasures the words printed on the page
that weeps my hollow name.

They matter not, birthed ideas.
Mere weight of words cannot impress
stubborn mountains to clear the way
or bereft Man to be as one.
No equal for merciless time,
what use is ink to ashen page,
to hail emotion from the dead?
Crowds of souls that walk barren roads,
discarding free will simply to conform.

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GrumpyOldFecker Comment by: GrumpyOldFecker - 2007-02-20 05:39
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Ahh, the old - Never to be rich and famous, or in this case never the recognition. I've a couple of these myself. Good descriptive use though.
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-02-19 21:57
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One of the few poems that take my breath away, Im adding it to my bookshelf, thanks for sharing
Carter Burke Comment by: Carter Burke - 2007-02-19 14:04
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Thanks, Trace. I thought about writing a paper about how powerful written words are compared to spoken words. I think the speaker here is expressing frustration rather than factuality. It's amazing how deeply you can touch someone with the right combination of characters strung into words punctuated by a period.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-02-19 13:58
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very powerful verse,with strong imagery--at the same time mournful and isolated--i am under the opposite impression that words are more powerful than anything else (they can move mountains) and that they are what matters most. I'm glad you shared this poem--very thought provoking post.
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