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coreyhopps
Corey Hopps
United States, Georgia, Savannah

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Butterfly/Bumble Bee

SHE be but/ter/fly
ME be bum/ble bee,
SHE, infected by my sting
ME, mesmerized
by the color of her wings

WE fly high together
spy flowers,
drink nectar,
navigate rain drops
in summer showers;
dance 'round sun rays
hour by hour.

She be but/ter/fly
She be bum/ble bee
WE buzz
and rub antennae,
hearts bearing one another's
signature
hypnotized by
each other's nature.

She be but/ter/fly
Me be bum/ble bee
bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

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Mrsg Comment by: Mrsg - 2007-03-02 19:19
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I am really liking this!! It's light and lovely. I enjoyed the lines, "SHE be but/ter/fly
ME be bum/ble bee," Good write!
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