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severed words hung their fringe
silently over heads
surely remains of dreams,
shattered and broken now,
still lie nestled within,
slumbering inside hearts
soothing the ache of sleep
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Wow. I really liked this little piece. I thought the form you used was interesting. I keep reading things in forms I've never seen before on this site, and I love it! Very nice use of words. I especially liked the line "soothing the ache of sleep". Great job!
