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eldia
Angela Dy
United States, WA, Seattle

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Letter to a Clairvoyant

Letter to a Clairvoyant

It is a gift, say some, but only you
know for sure. At your fingertips, the future;
but even one such as you cannot discern some simple things,
such as the reason why everything you set out to write
ends up a love poem. Strange, how you move
through mirth without recollection, committing yourself
instead to those times when you were scattered
as leaves, denuding trees in autumn.

You've been caught
picking through roses, searching
for aphids, and instead of a gun
you keep a flashlight next to your pillow
to frighten the nightmares lurking undercover.
In the dreams you choose to remember, you are
an emergency room doctor, a mountain climber,
a mermaid, one who numbers each evening
how many scales she's shed. Last night, the count
was over four hundred, and you knew the shape, exact size,
and profound iridescence of each fallen companion.

Your reality is not quite this clear.

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blueAilidh Comment by: blueAilidh - 2007-09-20 00:22
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I'd have to agree with lornawelsh,
"you were scattered/as leaves, denuding trees in autumn" imprints a amazing imagery. As does "searching/for aphids" and definitely "a mermaid, one who numbers each evening/how many scales sheâ??s shed." I'd love to see more.
beautiful.
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2007-03-04 11:15
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Oh, I like the idea behind this (if I'm right - I'm frequently wrong about poetry and should really stop reading and trying to make comments - bah).

She sees other people and their lives, their futures - but her own is blurred. She doesn't see the happy times, but dwells on times when she was 'scattered as leaves' (great image).

She feels safer in her imagination (dreams) but even then she picks and chooses what she dwells on - what she wants to remember. She sees her dreams more clearly than her reality.

Erm... yes, that's what I read here. If I'm wrong, well - that's okay, I still really enjoyed the read.

Cheers

Karen
nataliefernbell Comment by: nataliefernbell - 2007-03-01 12:50
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somehow this reminds me of an idealistic chuck p. its the ending line - your reality is not quite clear.
TonyfromBenoni Comment by: TonyfromBenoni - 2007-02-20 11:55
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A great bit of writing, I especially enjoyed 'the profound iridescence of each fallen companion'
lornawelsh Comment by: lornawelsh - 2007-02-20 11:42
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I like this it is whimsical and poigniant, i love the denuded trees and how many scales she's shed x
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