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Joni Ramos
Joni Ramos
Philippines, Manila

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Romeo and Juliet Resurrect

a kiss from thine lips

Juliet, whose

name didst thou utter

more than once,

I resurrect

 

beseech you this eventide

let me taste your sweetness

once again,

my fingertips yearn

to touch, the fine lines

of your silhouette, let me

comb the locks of your hair

 

shadows of the past that sealed our fate

the heavens,  the stars,

command thy moon

to freeze this hour,

whereupon your lips, I breathe

 

resurrect my love

partake of this moment

steal my fate,

your words, my salvation

your letter, my mortality

 

you and I proclaim our vow

here now,  under the balcony

where Verona is witness

to your beauty and the moon

hang-over from jealous stars

that glare,

 

let us leave Montague

and Capulet to feast upon

their mutiny, you and I

chastised

 

poison hath not the power

to seep into my veins,

blood that drips

only thoughts of you

within this hour, my Romeo

 

our ashes already scattered

bones locked in embrace

centuries dust, resurrect

history of us inseparable

 

we sealed our fate

entwined our bones remain untouched

our solemn vow they can't unearth

I throb from underneath this soil

 

my love for you remains

till dust

Juliet, Juliet,  I grope for you

within this waking hour

 

 

 

 


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MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2007-02-21 12:01
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hi,
I love the tone of the piece. It felt weathered. great word choices and deliver.
I think it did the old story a lot of justice.
thanks for the read.
and thanks for sharing this poem.
peace,
MM
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2007-02-21 05:25
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If only I were so talented as to be able to write like that.
"blood that that drips" Maybe one too many thats?
Esquire Comment by: Esquire - 2007-02-21 04:30
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I like the use of language, as well as the subtle suggestiveness(that's if I read it correctly). Kudos!!!
Ethgar Comment by: Ethgar - 2007-02-20 18:54
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It's incredibly romantic... and I really love how you use the old language... it lends itself perfectly to this Shakespearean resurrection.

"So long as men can breath or eyes can see,
so long lives this, and this gives life to thee"
-Shakespeare (Shall I compare thee to a summer's day)

It seemed appropriate. :)
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2007-02-20 18:25
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My Shakespearean attempt to resurrect Romeo and Juliet and this poem which was inspired by a couple found embracing each other, centuries later, their bones locked in embrace(Don't remember where)
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