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Steps
one after another
steps made without stopping
not looking one way or the other
cant let it get to you
if you stop you will fall
then you must rise and continue
trying no matter what the talk
moving forward is the truth
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| This piece is very concise and reminds me of the work that one must do to pass life's trials. Well done!!!! |
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'if you stop you will fall'
that line really stands out to me. It's great how you've described life completely in just a few lines |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-03-08 14:15
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Great way to describe the path of life.
Walking, falling, getting back up and going on.
The pace of the poem fits the words perfectly.** |
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Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-03-02 01:28
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| i like the movement, the straight forwardness, and brevity of this poem. solid, just like moving forward in life takes steps, little steps perhaps, but steps just the same. good write. |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-03-01 17:00
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| nice poem. very concise with a strong, clear message. |
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