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marta
Marta Weeks
United States, California, Elk Grove

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A Paranoid's Apocalypse

Cry the corpse of generations, for God is coming.
To save some of us
God, please save us from:

The righteous who make our moral dilemmas
issues of separation, and
propose goodness while teaching bigotry.

Saviors with walls too high for children to climb
who count days with dimes
upon the rock of ages,
and sell water by the riverbank.

Jails filled with crosses of the unredeemed
sorted by color of skin, for illegalities
that imprison by virtue of discrimination.
Managed by jailers who earn more than educators
fuck prostitutes and snort drugs.

Good-doers who make wings with feathers of fear,
the joyful reminiscent who overlook reality to preach
that only for some rain falls and oxygen fills forests.

Oh, God, save us from holy foamers, self-acclaimed
holy rollers, who profess exclusivity. Hang them in hell
to toil in their pompous redemption
at the helm of greed and pulpits of evil.

Marta

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Breathe Comment by: Breathe - 2008-01-15 17:51
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My god, the last stanza had me reeling, the rhythm was absolutely incredible!

The entire poem was so unwavering and convicted. You truly believe in what you are writing and you execute it with fantastic control. Excellent.
marta Comment by: marta - 2007-07-14 14:42
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MaggieMay, YThank you for your generous comments.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-07-12 14:33
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Lot of anger in this one. It seems that someone really got you stirred up. I hope everything's ok now. All religious people aren't self-righteous. I know, I'm one of the biggest sinners and I remember where I came from.
lrlewis Comment by: lrlewis - 2007-06-15 22:04
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nice play with words on this, and a powerful sense of outrage pushing against its seams. i liked it very much.
marta Comment by: marta - 2007-04-01 09:22
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Thank you!
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